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Subject [GitHub] [incubator] dave2wave commented on a change in pull request #73: Update ppmc.ad
Date Thu, 24 Dec 2020 19:30:08 GMT

dave2wave commented on a change in pull request #73:
URL: https://github.com/apache/incubator/pull/73#discussion_r548722436



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File path: pages/guides/ppmc.ad
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@@ -105,30 +105,30 @@ Body:
 Joe Bob has been voted as a new member of the *PODLING* PPMC. the vote thread is at: *link
to the vote thread*
 --
 
-*Please note that there is a grace period of 72 hours from when the  NOTICE is sent to the
Incubator PMC to when the proposed member should be formally invited. This is an important
part of the overall process. Failure to do this can result in an embarassing situation for
people involved.*
+*Note that there is a grace period of 72 hours from when the PPMC sends the  NOTICE to the
IPMC to when the PPMC should formally invite the proposed member. This is an important part
of the overall process. Failure to do this can result in an embarassing situation for people
involved.*
 
 In the email you send, replace *PODLING* with your podling's actual name, and replace Joe
Bob with the person's actual name.
 
-After 72 hours, Joe Bob should be invited to join the PPMC, using a sample message like link:ppmc-offer.txt[this].
+After 72 hours, the PPMC should invite Joe Bob to join it, using message like link:ppmc-offer.txt[this].

Review comment:
       Maybe use a genderless name here instead of "Joe Bob"




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