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From Dan Diephouse <>
Subject Re: [doc] call for feedback for
Date Tue, 19 Sep 2006 18:32:36 GMT
This is very good Robert. Comments inline:

robert burrell donkin wrote:

> is currently a
> draft document. i think that it's strong enough to push towards
> promoting it (and putting it in the indexes).
> feedback would be very much appreciated. as always, if anyone can see
> any improvements please post a patch to this list, open a JIRA or (if
> you have karma) dive in.
> but in particular please reply with feedback about:
> 1 presentation (is the way the content presented easily digested and
> understandable?)


> 2 commentary (is the commentary on the template generally too long,
> too short or just about right?)
Seems just right to me.

> 3 examples (would more examples and/or long examples improve the
> document or (conversely) are the examples too verbose at present?)
The examples are very helpful. Definitely not too verbose!

> 4 style changes (blue for notes)
The styling makes it very clear whats an example and whats not. I like it.

- Dan

Dan Diephouse
(616) 971-2053
Envoi Solutions LLC

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