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From rlenfer...@apache.org
Subject [comdev-site] branch master updated: Update __index.md
Date Sun, 29 Nov 2020 13:35:44 GMT
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rlenferink pushed a commit to branch master
in repository https://gitbox.apache.org/repos/asf/comdev-site.git


The following commit(s) were added to refs/heads/master by this push:
     new c33ebe5  Update __index.md
     new 189d79b  Merge pull request #20 from cottage14/patch-5
c33ebe5 is described below

commit c33ebe5d88023d48cae95898959b79fa818d84fb
Author: Andrew Wetmore <andrew@cottage14.com>
AuthorDate: Sun Nov 29 09:24:16 2020 -0400

    Update __index.md
    
    Minor text edits to improve readability.
---
 source/newcomers/__index.md | 18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/source/newcomers/__index.md b/source/newcomers/__index.md
index d0f4c83..fe5bd7c 100644
--- a/source/newcomers/__index.md
+++ b/source/newcomers/__index.md
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@ title: Welcome, Apache newcomers!
 slug: index
 ---
 
-In this section we hope to help you take your first steps as an open source 
-developer in one of our many Apache project communities.  As an all-volunteer 
+In this section we'll help you take your first steps as an open source 
+developer in one of our many Apache project communities. As an all-volunteer 
 run organization, Apache and the many Apache projects rely on people like 
 you stepping up to help out.  
 
@@ -12,11 +12,11 @@ you stepping up to help out.
   * [How should I behave?](/contributors/etiquette) - etiquette and codes of conduct at Apache
   * [What can I work on?](https://helpwanted.apache.org) - suggested tasks you can start
working on today 
   * [Mentoring Programme](/mentoringprogramme.html) - an introduction to our mentoring programme
-      * [Mentoring in formal education](/mentorprogrammeformaleducation.html) - how to engage
your students on open source
+      * [Mentoring in formal education](/mentorprogrammeformaleducation.html) - how to engage
your students in open source
       * [Local Mentors Programme](/localmentors.html) - Find ASF people who live near you
   * [Newbie FAQ](/newbiefaq.html) - some commonly asked questions (and their answers)
   * [How many projects are at Apache?](https://projects.apache.org/) - we have a **LOT**
of different project communities!
-  * [Just show me the code!](https://www.apache.org/dev/) - site index of technical questions
(where's SVN, how to login, etc.)
+  * [Just show me the code!](https://www.apache.org/dev/) - site index of technical questions
(where's SVN, how to log in, etc.)
 
 <a name="Index-FirstContributions"></a>
 # First Contributions
@@ -28,14 +28,14 @@ you have little to offer the ASF. However, you will be surprised at
 how much you can help, even now. 
 
 Since we aim to be a place for newcomers to learn
-about the ASF as a whole and you are (probably) a newcomer *any feedback
+about the ASF as a whole and you are (probably) a newcomer, *any feedback
 you can give or unanswered questions you can ask us here* will help us improve what
-we offer to those who come afterwards. Our [etiquette tips](/contributors/etiquette) can
help you 
+we offer to those who come after you. Our [etiquette tips](/contributors/etiquette) can help
you 
 write emails that will get some answers.
 
-Feedback can be provided on this website and questions asked about anything Apache by subscribing
to our mailing
-list by sending a mail to 
-[dev-subscribe@community.apache.org](mailto:dev-subscribe@community.apache.org). Once subscribed
you can send your mail to
+You can provide feedback on this website and ask questions about anything Apache by subscribing
to our mailing
+list. Send an email to 
+[dev-subscribe@community.apache.org](mailto:dev-subscribe@community.apache.org). Once subscribed
you can send your questions or feedback to
 [dev@community.apache.org](mailto:dev@community.apache.org).
 
 <div style="width: 700px;" type="helpwanted" project="comdev"  description="Community
Development"></div>


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