It's really good, I like the template a lot. It will probably be very
helpful. And I agree that a TOC would be helpful.

On 9/19/06, Justin Erenkrantz <justin@erenkrantz.com> wrote:
>
> On 9/18/06, robert burrell donkin <robertburrelldonkin@gmail.com> wrote:
> > http://incubator.apache.org/guides/proposal.html is currently a
> > draft document. i think that it's strong enough to push towards
> > promoting it (and putting it in the indexes).
>
> +1.
>
> > 1 presentation (is the way the content presented easily digested and
> > understandable?)
>
> Two small comments for your consideration.
>
> First, what about a TOC at the beginning that links to the other
> sections of the documents?  That way people have an idea of the
> sections - but this document is long enough that a TOC is nice to
> have.
>
> The other thing that I would find helpful is to change the color of
> the examples and commentary.  They are way too similar.  Maybe one of
> them should be boxed with a dark-color background?  It's a minor nit,
> but I think if we can make the distinction greater (the font
> difference isn't enough, IMO), it'd be easier to understand.
> (Actually, if I look at it, I think you may have tried with a
> light-blue and white?  If so, the color difference is too subtle.)
>
> Even with these minor nits, this is certainly good enough to link from
> the main page.  Thanks so much - this is going to be a great help!  --
> justin
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