From general-return-11018-apmail-incubator-general-archive=incubator.apache.org@incubator.apache.org Tue Sep 19 18:32:52 2006 Return-Path: Delivered-To: apmail-incubator-general-archive@www.apache.org Received: (qmail 25972 invoked from network); 19 Sep 2006 18:32:50 -0000 Received: from hermes.apache.org (HELO mail.apache.org) (209.237.227.199) by minotaur.apache.org with SMTP; 19 Sep 2006 18:32:50 -0000 Received: (qmail 25485 invoked by uid 500); 19 Sep 2006 18:32:47 -0000 Delivered-To: apmail-incubator-general-archive@incubator.apache.org Received: (qmail 25338 invoked by uid 500); 19 Sep 2006 18:32:46 -0000 Mailing-List: contact general-help@incubator.apache.org; run by ezmlm Precedence: bulk List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: List-Post: List-Id: Reply-To: general@incubator.apache.org Delivered-To: mailing list general@incubator.apache.org Received: (qmail 25327 invoked by uid 99); 19 Sep 2006 18:32:46 -0000 Received: from idunn.apache.osuosl.org (HELO idunn.apache.osuosl.org) (140.211.166.84) by apache.org (qpsmtpd/0.29) with ESMTP; Tue, 19 Sep 2006 11:32:46 -0700 X-ASF-Spam-Status: No, hits=0.1 required=5.0 tests=FORGED_RCVD_HELO Received: from ([216.73.126.120:40380] helo=mail.envoisolutions.com) by idunn.apache.osuosl.org (ecelerity 2.1 r(10620)) with ESMTP id E3/17-28275-AC730154 for ; Tue, 19 Sep 2006 11:32:43 -0700 Received: from [70.217.143.155] (155.sub-70-217-143.myvzw.com [70.217.143.155]) by mail.envoisolutions.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9BA1B1009D for ; Tue, 19 Sep 2006 11:25:18 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <451037C4.30804@envoisolutions.com> Date: Tue, 19 Sep 2006 14:32:36 -0400 From: Dan Diephouse User-Agent: Mozilla Thunderbird 1.0.2 (Windows/20050317) X-Accept-Language: en-us, en MIME-Version: 1.0 To: general@incubator.apache.org Subject: Re: [doc] call for feedback for http://incubator.apache.org/guides/proposal.html References: In-Reply-To: Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Spam-Rating: minotaur.apache.org 1.6.2 0/1000/N This is very good Robert. Comments inline: robert burrell donkin wrote: > http://incubator.apache.org/guides/proposal.html is currently a > draft document. i think that it's strong enough to push towards > promoting it (and putting it in the indexes). > > feedback would be very much appreciated. as always, if anyone can see > any improvements please post a patch to this list, open a JIRA or (if > you have karma) dive in. > > but in particular please reply with feedback about: > > 1 presentation (is the way the content presented easily digested and > understandable?) Yup. > > 2 commentary (is the commentary on the template generally too long, > too short or just about right?) > Seems just right to me. > 3 examples (would more examples and/or long examples improve the > document or (conversely) are the examples too verbose at present?) > The examples are very helpful. Definitely not too verbose! > 4 style changes (blue for notes) > The styling makes it very clear whats an example and whats not. I like it. Cheers, - Dan -- Dan Diephouse (616) 971-2053 Envoi Solutions LLC http://netzooid.com --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: general-unsubscribe@incubator.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: general-help@incubator.apache.org